The Story Moves Along

Crimson Star, as I've titled it, is moving along well. I've asked Joy for a quick once over so she can help me make a plot decision (exactly how and why does a 16 year old girl leave on a dangerous mission into an alien filled galaxy?). This is one of those things that can drive a serious sci-fi fan absolutely nuts. Good story, plausable plot hook, enganging characters. Then they do things that would NEVER happen for any reason. Anyway, having been a 16 year old girl once before, she can hopefully provide some insight. If things progress well, I might post the first half dozen chapters for my faithful fans (both of them) to read.